WOW!!
This is an awesome poem dude!
i loved the depth of this poem..
it like blew me away!
the flow was good
I could feel the sadness of this poem
Which is very rare with me!
That goes to show how good this is!
The title was very catchy!
The opening stanza like captured me
and didnt let me go till i finished
Reading the whole poem! Very Well Done my friend!
Great read, Great Job!

Keep SMiling
~D*K~

Another good poem. it was very touching. keep it up. 5/5

Excellent piece fo writing! This poem pulsates, as you read it. You included good imagery and good imagination. You should enter this poem in a national poetry contest, because I think its a winner! Keep writing and keep sharing. May the force be with, Luke Sky Walker! Rated 10/10. If you have time, please read some of my poetry.

FireFly747

Good job i love this and i think it is very well done good job and also thx for ur comment:D

keenan

The wording was great, the portrayal was great....this is wonderful work.

This is excellent! Especially when you get to the part "sanity stay with me"

It paints a pretty sad picture, but a great one.. amazing work