That was weird. I loved it. I thought from the first verses it was going to be your average love poem, but in the second part it totally changed.

I hope you continue writing, you're really good at it ;)

~Scarlett

Beautiful, haunting love poem. A nice break in the overly-used lost love poems. Unique and heartbreaking.
5/5

[Tragic]

Very well written. Sad but beautiful.

Thanks for commenting on mine =)

Very well written, i absoulutely loved it. great sensery details. really bitter-sweet mood. you kind of shoked me at the end and i thought it was one of the better poems i've read. if you could comment on my poems i'd appreciate it
andi

Omg, I love that so much. it's just like, wow...

Well done again, my freind. Keep it up. You have a great sense of rhythm to your poetry. Great job.

Awww so good! LOVED IT!