I really love your poem!! your very talented i just hope the beautiful girl isnt you, you have so much talent

I love it :) it's good. good flow.
good job

O sis.
this is heartaching
if this is what ur feeling..please talk to me about it!
this was amazing!
5/5...doy :P
ily!!
ur lik sis

Awww sweetheart, this poem is so very sad. Is this about you and a guy, or just the senerio of a cutter's broken heart? How are you doing, I haven't heard from you in so long. I hope you are okay. Hugs, and remember to talk to me when you need a friend. *more hugs*

-Tainted

Sad and beautiful... nice writing. :)

-Luna-

5/5

Awww sooo sad :( great poem 5/5

Beautiful

I love this poem, it souds so good

Woah, this is absoluttly amazing, im crying at the moment, cuz thats exactly how my ex boyfriends left me, unwhole. ! its a beautifully written poem and you are amazing with words! keep it up if u ever need to talk i'm always here for ya
-hayley

Beautifull poem. Really deep and not to messy:)

Hokey honkin!That is quality awsome and crazy-good!Great job!

Oh my goodness, I thought this poem was amazing kinda dark, but still, it was really scary that I could relate to it,You basically took my thoughts and put them into a poem. lol guys are a miztake all girls should know that. but i thought this poem was wicked awesome. Deeply depressing but thats great. KK my stuff isnt as good but check it out

the other XxbleedingangelxX

Amazing poem!

I cant even explain how much i like this poem, the only word that i can say is... Wow..

Wow that was really good i loved it

Omg i Love this its sad but i can just relate to it . it beautiful.

Love you

Wow, that was touchin great job! check out my poems

Seems so true