Your eyes

by Amanda   Sep 28, 2006


When I stare into your eyes
and your eyes alone,
I get lost at sea, and believe me,
I can't find my way back home

The weird thing is, I'm not drowning
in the water of your eyes,
I lye gently still, and I will,
be like that for all of time

I am captivated by the love
that in your eyes remains,
I don't know why, but I can't deny,
It's just you that makes me feel this way

When I look into your eyes
I see heaven at its best,
And remember that I'll love you
more than all the rest.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Well thank you for that. I'll keep it in mind

  • 19 years ago

    by Marcus

    That was a very good poem,it do seem that you try a little hard on a concrete ryhme pattern,and at times when we try to hard ,the sincerity and heart of the poem get left out .So just remember to let your emotions roll...........

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