Very nice.I could actually picture out what you were writing about.
A worthwhile read.

God Bless!

Wonderfully written....it left a smile on my face and that my friend is a challenge today.

Beautiful written! flowed well with beautiful message.."The hardest lesson in true love is when lose love. Any other kind of love fades away with time. But true love keeps building inside and yearns to be released. go through life, everyday with that person in heart. No matter who's with, they just can't compare. The love in heart is so strong, Never letting go and never looking back."

best wishes.

Lying on grass, star gazing in an open field together
Bonded by their hands, eyes, lips and legs entangled
Even time itself has stopped to smile at these lovers
Dreaming in the world of reality with eyes wide open

I loved these lines 5.5
thx for rrc on my poem

Dreaming in the world of reality with eyes wide open ^_^ I love it! Those words, that feeling, this poem. Very nice write, romantic and hopeful, it brought a smile to my face. Nicely done :)

AMAZING lov. u deeply show lov in full scale. keep writing:)

Breathtaking job. In a way it's a bit humorous too. The only suggestion I can find is that in the first and second stanza, you ended a line with Lovers.

*I also wrote a freestyle love poem^-^

Another grea job by a great poet. so beautifuly written, keep up the great job like always....
a 5/5 from me.

You have really romantic imagery, Darien, all wrapped up in beautiful words. The only uggestion is maybe changing the final two lines that both have the word love I think it is close together.

That's so sweeeet Darien. I love this poem. I liked your wording and description, it was wonderful. I never lost intrest in it either. :]]]

Awwwwwwwwh that was so sweet!

Ohhhh. Darien!!! This was cute. Awh! Lol..

It was beautifuly done. The flow was perfect & the rhyming was great! Your word usuage was nice aswel. ;P

All the lovey dovey emotions nearly made me cry. They're just too cute. Lol. Awesome job SMAWCE brother!! This is definately the SMAWCE way of writing ;P Haha.

Natalie``

"Young at heart, strong in spirit and pure in mind
Romance revived within the flames like a Phoenix"

Beautiful and refreshing. Very relaxed, descriptive poem. Keep it up

Aww, it's so cute! ^_^ I loved it! It reminded of me and this one guy...We did exactly as it says...without the hormones. >.< I thought it was the cutest thing ever! =P

Anywho...The poem was excellent! I loved all the descriptions, and you have true emotion which is easy to see in this piece. Great work. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow... it was very very well written...
love the vocabulary you used in the poem! 5/5

Wow, ok I loved it, felt it wasn't one of your best love poems, for you are really good at love poems, but I don't know something lacked from this one that a lot of your others don't.

The Flow and the structure was good. Not really any rhyming going on, but you deffenitly know how to make a poem work without having any. Great work here, keep it up.

Ciao, Joe

Omg such a great use of words! this was so powerful. it was really good. good job on it =] xx

Great use of words, and again i loved it.... keep up the work

I love the poem. One of the best I've seen so far. You have a very good way of capturing emotion. Congrats.

I thought some of the love poems you have done in the past were better, but I still enjoyed this one.
I loved the imagery and the wording was amazing.