A beautifully sad poem. Such flow and deepness and love. Unconditional love is what saves us sometimes. Great job

Awww very very sad and sweet poem for your dad and great feelings you expressed here and very vivid details
you made it pretty well
I like the words you use to make it really sad

Geneross

Woohoo another masterpeice i really loved it but i dont like it that the person is in pain its soo sad at that part but i guess thats wat it is susposed to be like lol good job

keenan