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  • 17 years ago

    by xViagraTheCookiex

    Urg marie!! i really did break up with him and im srry that it hurt you..but honestly it hurt me when u went out with him because i liked him a lot... more then i liked joel and i told you how much i liked joel and thats scary.. u made me cut on that sunday after noon when u guys started to date on that sunday and it bleed a lot... its almost healed and its been wat..3, 4 weeks now and it still hasn't gone away... and every night that carson didn't talk to me i cut.. and i just cut once again... i thought i never would again... but i did.... but the one i did the day u were over.. bleed so much that it wouldn't stop for 1 1/2 hrs.... thats y i kept holdin it if u noticed... but ne way wats new??

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    Wow. This rocks. It reads like a story, I don't know how to describe it. Sucky situation, though, if it's real-ish.

    {{if you like, check out one of my poems and tell me what you think}}

    ~Scarlett

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This poem is really good. shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by katrina porter

    Wow such a good poem. I can see your anger and your pain in this poem and i can see why you would cut
    I have never cut and hope that i never will cut in my life

    XOJennaOX

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Very nice. Full of emotion.

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Wat a gr8 write hun got my 5 vote
    keep writing and take care sarah x