My Sunset Girl

by Love With Bullets   Oct 1, 2006


My sunset girl
dont turn this decision into a disaster
our hearts led us to this
we took our only shot
and it looks like we didnt miss
my hearts forever in your hand
If you dont want it I understand

my sunset girl
I'll always catch you if you fall
if you feel like your losing it all
I'll have your back till the end
remember in me you'll always have a friend

my sunset girl
I'll never forget you
you'll live on in my heart
its been like this since the start
holding you seems to be more like a memory
seeing you just seems less likely
oh sunset girl I loved you
and I swear I still do
but now we've moved on you and I
lets call it a farewell
lets never say its goodbye

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  • 19 years ago

    by anthony

    Heh tell someone elc they lack creativity... i dont even rember what ur poem was about!! oh w8... u tellin a story on ur ex?? well yeah poems ight 4.5/4.5 ... i just dont get the feelings u have.. seems u really love her but yet u know u cant have her back?? if im right then i guess ur poem iz 5/5 but overall very well penned

  • 19 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    My gosh, the way you write, I don't think you will ever make a poem that doesn't grasp the person who read this' heart! Keep it up!

    --Ally