I havent down-vote on yours at all! infact i think the only votes i gave you were 5's and mabye a 4. i wasnt me downvoting them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mel xxoo

Another one that i enjoyed. 5/5

This is short, but holds so much pure emotion through it. I really like the first stanza. It was seemed to have much animosity and yet sadness. You did such a great job on this poem. I can definitely relate to this in so many ways. The flow and emotions in this poem was really good and this was very well written! 5/5 Keep it up!

I would work on this stanza...

It follows me everywhere I go,
The pain inside of me.
I wish it would just let me go,
And let me be free.

Go and Go confusing me, like 2 words one right after the other just makes the flow a bit harder.All in all I think you are a good writer though

Sad poem, I can feel the emotions on this one.
and what great with this poem is that many out there can relate to this one.
5/5
God Bless!

Nice poem still 5/5

I can feel the emotion throughout this one. Well written, with a good flow. I like the ending, i think its really good. Great work. 5/5