Comments : What Am I

  • 17 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Touchingly simple. Love poems aren't my thing, but well done on this one.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    I know what u mean... what am i supposed to do with this guy...yeah well any ways i liked the poem, it was just exactly what i would say...but never do. Great Job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Armygurl

    Good job on the poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Chantelle

    Hey hun, its good to see your still writing. I hope everything is going ok...hope to talk to you soon. You still got your awesome talent. Take care xx

  • 17 years ago

    by xBlackRosex

    Hey i loved this poem, u can feel what the guy in ur poem is feeling, very good, u have awsome talent :D keep up the good work.
    Oh, and i think that when u wrote:
    What am i supposed to say?
    so you remember,
    His awful ways.

    i think u should have written
    What am i supposed to say?
    so you dont remember,
    His awful ways.

    i think it would make more sense, but hey, its still good :D
    xBlackRosex

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrie

    Very simple, but it says a lot.