I loved the flow of the poem! It was a really great poem w/o a doubt. I wish i could hear it now i know it will be a hit if it ever got out there! Well great work and your very talented keep it up!

Whoa this is seriously really good. keep up the good work!
-steph

Great poem, loved the rhymming and the short stanzas
5/5
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