Ooooh. A Halloween poem. Tehe. I love Halloween. But here in Australia no one really celebrates it. It sucks! My dad's american and he told me one day we can go to America just for Halloween. Lmao.

Anywho, back to the poem. It was done really nicely. I liked it alot. The ending was awesome aswel!! Keep it up hun! 5/5

Natalie``

Oh & Good luck in the contest/challenge.

This should win...Idk what kinda contest it was but this was interesting...and it means more than just a halloween poem. Anyways...great job and Good luck!
Take care & God bless!

[[ Poetess ]]

You have captured the essence of Halloween in this poem. Instead of putting on the mask of pretense and go about our business, we put on the mask of our darkside and go into the night. Beautifully done. I'm glad you're on our side for this challenge.

Sarah,
You have taken this challenge and created a masterpiece . The creativity in this poem is amazing .
EOP has some darn tough competition this time .
Great read, my friend !

I loved the write!!! It shows how every day ppl put on masks to be who they want to be. This is a winner for sure!!

Simple yet Perfect. I liked "Alas, they do this all the time. Cunningly pure to those so blind' I'm speechless.. how can n e one not give you a perfect score?
5/5

Sara i really liked this poem by you, keep it up. 5/5 from me.....