My Love For You

by jgrainger43   Oct 3, 2006


Love is just a state of being for some,
but i have only 2 states of being, asleep, and loving you.
When I'm am with you, my mouth goes numb,
cause i never know what to say, if only i knew.

i truly love you with all my heart,
and that is something that will never wear down.
my love for her could be described as a fine art,
you could never make me frown.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey! The only thing I would suggest is stay consistant with what point of view your writing the poem from. At first it sounds like your writing it to her. ("i truly love you with all my heart"). Then it changes to writing it about her. ("my love for her could be..")

    Other than that it is a great start to this poem!! Awesome job!! =)

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