On my mind.

by reborn   Oct 3, 2006


I ain't doing too good
But that's cause things aren't going the way they should
I'm facing complications
Concerning my plans of education
Back in New York city
All of this could be just another fantasy.

I pray non stop for another chance
To change the course of my existence
I've been thinking about us so much it's crazy
I would have never imagined what's happened to me
Instead of fooling around all summer
Here I am crazy about her
You've been on my mind ever since that night
When we became good friends with just a slight
Ambiguous common attraction
Which only led to an increasing frustration
For even though we hadn't known each other for long
The connection between us was just too strong.

I miss our moments spent together
When we couldn't keep our hands off each other
Our passionate kissing
The warmth of our lips playing
A game of their own
Or our cuddling at your home
I remember the softness of your skin
When my fingers would gently caress you starting from your chin
Then down your throat and shoulders
Breathing down your neck and ears to make you shiver
My goal being to excite all your senses
In order to maximize my chances
Of you wanting me badly
To make love to you passionately
I keep on having those flashbacks of what we did in my hotel room
On that beautiful afternoon
Baby you looked so fine
Every bit of you I wanted to be mine
I'm mentally stripping you now
And I still feel like saying "Wow"

I remember the shower we took afterwards
No sense of feeling awkward
Anymore
Cuz it made us become closer.

I have found all that I want in you
All that I have longed for is in you
All these years I was unhappy
Because my ex lacked all of these qualities
Loving, caring, affectionate and sweet
Seems like nothing's missing in you from the "Dream girl kit".

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  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Lots of emotions hidden there i loved the way your poem told your story :) i felt like i lived it :)) its very well writen :))