Very good indeed. I love how you have left the reader knowing that there is more than heart ache and a new chance to start over.

-Sher

Thats a nice poem! keep it up!

Thats a nice poem! keep it up!

Perfect penned myfriend, awesome! though simply write, but you know this so inspiring poem..

Interesting point of view towards the circle of life, I like it. This one was very well written and it is one of my favorite that I have read from you. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

Very nice 5/5 and thanks for commenting my poems

5/5 Great poem! Loved it!

Very good. One thing, the first line sounds as if it has a different grammar than the rest.

Awh, now this I liked! It was reallly great, I loved the descriptions, the idea, and just everything about the poem.. It was very enlighening and refreshing.. Wonderful work, very original! 5/5

Wow amazing job on this.
a very well written poem.
i really like this a lot.
you are very talented.
keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Luved it. ;P It's awesome.

I really like this. It's different to what i usually read i think, and i like it alot. I like poems about life, and you have much talent in writing them. After reading the last part of this poem especially about the Circle of Life, i was in awe. I just said wow, and i don't have words to describe the talent and intellegence you have to write something so good. It has got me thinking, and i think that is the best ending to a poem. It's very clever. An excellent write. Please keep it up, you have such talent! =] 5/5 - If only i could rate higher, i would.

Tammie xo

What can i say 5/5

Another thought-provoking write---Amazing piece...I started reading and was totally captivated by the way you wrote the poem--I'm definately adding you to my favorites; I love your work---5/5

Beautiful poem hun! I coudn't have wrote it any better myself. I had to read this twice. Not because I didn't understand, but because I loved it so much the first time that I read it. lol. You have shared your wonderful talent again for all to see. Thank you 5/5

Love
Letty

Misstress,
I have read your poem...
Your words and expressions are powerful.
And the most beautiful part is, that it is constructive...it gives hope...to our failures of life...that we never wish...but remind us of our reality...and perhaps also define that we are humans at the end...and not Gods...I will read more of your poems...5/5