Comments : Fake Smile

  • 17 years ago

    by Janine Alford

    That's is such a good poem. It says a lot about me and my depression. I can understand everything the poem is saying.Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Wow, I can relate to this one so much...it's EXACTLY what I'm goin through rite now...great wording! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    This is really good. I like it alot. I think at some point in time every single one of us feels like that. Fakes smiles are probably worn more often than real ones...

    Anyways, thanks for the comment :)
    I'm glad you liked my poem.

    ~Scarlett

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is another nice poem!
    but very sad! yet very true that you cant tell anyone!

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This is a sad poem, i loved the enind, it was powerful and i liked the topic and how you put your words together=D Good Job

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Ah very nice poem.flows well and the emotions are there.
    a 5/5 for sure.

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow I can totally relate to this poem. I loved it...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow... i can really relate to this poem.
    You have put alot of emotion into this poem (even if its not what your feeling).

    Brilliant work, Definatly a 5/5 from me!

    ~Murder.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    WOW that ending was so powerful.
    I hope you don't really feel like this, if you ever need to talk message me.
    My favourite poem so far. 5/5