Great poem asweel and nice rhythm and great flow of words

Btw thanks for tghe comments yeah I need to edit that one lols
I just feel so dumb this days

Geneross

The reality is so gripping...this was very very good work, at the least. 5/5.

Not sure how to find the words to describe this. Great Job I could say, but I know that wouldn't quite cover it. 5/5