The part about ' white emptiness' was the best. Two words with such impact. Such description. It's very unusual, and thats what makes a poet great. Keep it up.

The point tipped with nothingness
takes over spreading from a single point
white begins to flood, darkness is soaked
life begins to scream

wow thats deep.

Wow. loved the end:

The point tipped with nothingness
takes over spreading from a single point
white begins to flood, darkness is soaked
life begins to scream

i honestly could see this. it seems almost like the creation of the world would be like this. almost

Ya by far i think this is my favorite poem i have done cuz the rest suck