Comments : An athlete

  • 17 years ago

    by LOST

    As an athlete myself, i say you completly hit the target exectly! well done!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Omg this one is definitely love. it's so beautiful how it conveys an athlete's passion for something that causes so much pain. i think every athlete knows what that's like.

    Parker

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is another favourite, because again, it is something really original in concept.
    I particularly enjoyed the wording in this, although the structure threw me off a little.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    I like this poem, dont know why, but its good. a 5/5!!!

  • Great poem, so inspirational and un forced, great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    "The teams [are] behind you one hundred percent,"

    "That you don't have an o[u]nce of strength left in you,"

    I myself am an athlete, and I'm rather delighted to read this piece of yours. It refreshed me, once again, of my remembrances in the past--the victories and the failures that had occurred is quite nostalgic now. Extra props for having this piece almost correlative to life.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Nicely penned poem, encouraging to read You did anexcellent job as always