Comments : Winter (Acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Wow, that was very beautiful! Such a lovely image painted in the reader's mind 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Very good description of Winter Noni. I don't like the cold, but I like snow. So, winter is fun for me sometimes.. and only sometimes. Ohh and I thought it was funny you wrote naked. Haha, naked in winter, that seems, ridiculous! :) good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this was amazing, the imagery used was excellent. beatuiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I like these poems are so cool .. Your rhyming fit right into it and like i said before it must be kinda hard to get all the winter words right.. and rhyme... lol amazing job my favorite line:
    Indefinite beauty beyond minds of mortals
    GJ
    5/5