Comments : I Wasn't Expecting This

  • 17 years ago

    by f0rSaKeN AngeL

    Absolutely beautiful! My words just can't explain how I feel right now. Your poem has awakened a lot of old memoirs that i kept locked inside.
    I can imagine your pain to some extent - nothing can compare to the loss of a loved one.. Hang in there and keep up the good work!

    Alex

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Beautifully written, lovee` .
    What I feel right now, I can`t put down in words . Yur poem was just beautiful .

    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by tears-i-cry

    My boyfriens is dead so i know how u feel.Its alright to cry.I cry every day.

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    Im not telling you simpathy right now or anything but im sayign that youre not alone i can relate two a couple months ago my boyfriend died in a car crash.

    but anyways to your poem...
    "And all those whispered words
    Said gently in my ear"
    Its ahmazing.
    Like honestly you are so talented.
    This is so origional and creative and i love it so much. i am adding this poem to my favorites
    <3jess

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    I wanted to cry...that's great that you can take such an emotional tragedy and turn it into a beautiful poem-5/5