It was pretty good, but there are some spots that need spaces (like after a period or comma). Otherwise, pretty cool! =D Keep on writing!

~~Spanish367

Wow. really deep and touching.

Wow that is like brill i like hehe i really do it was cool xx

I kno exactly how u feel i feel the same way wit this guy at school
great poem
check out some of my stuff if u like poems about crushes

Very nice.. I like it..