Aww this is a very beautiful and loving poem. so deep and wonderful. i can relate to it. i love the rhymes! great job on this! 5/5

~Kristina

Yay! i finally get to read the whole poem... hahaa

That is a really good poem and you put a lot of feelings in it, . . . 5/5 from me!!! 8 )

[Send me off to a fantasy,
I don't want a reality check.

^Such cute words! I loved them, Made me smile along with the rest of the poem. Had the power to make me say awh =P
Your really good at ending your poems!
Another ending I really enjoyed.
Well done. [:

I rly like this one its rly rly good 5/5 keep up the good work!

An amazing write!
i liked it alot
ï like the way you use your words!
keep it up!