Very intresting poem. I liked the out of world feeling to it. Nice job.

Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have meant something :)

please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

Ahh this is cute!! welcome to the site! i read your post in the Fun and Humor Introduce Yourself section... great job and keep it up!