Wow i like that but the countied kinda confused me but i still like it 5/5

Does countied mean continued? this was really good. the words were simple and that made it all the more powerful because of your style. Good job!
luv, 6th Trinity

Continued. You spelled it wrong numerous times. Check that out!

Awesome ameks my think of the quote "i love you is 8 letters, but so is b.u.1.1.s.h.i.t."

awesome poem, keep up the great work