No need to rhyme in this poem. Free verse can sometimes express ourselves greater than any other style of poetry. Great poem.

Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have meant something :)

please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

What a nice message conveyed in your poem. People should let those around them know they are appreciated and loved, you never know if that will be your last chance to tell them....Good job!