Monster

by brokenmind   Oct 8, 2006


A loaner a weirdo
a twisted little freak
no communication
he dares not to speak.

Never had a girlfriend
never been kissed
if he were to die
he would never be missed.

Across the road a playground
it gives his only joys
to watch the little children
playing with their toys.

He starts to get these feelings
he starts to get these ideas
fantasies of children
brings him to tears.

He trys to forget
he tries not to think
but before he knows
hes at the park in a blink.

He gives a little girl a sweet
and asks her to his room
but what the girl doesnt know
shes going to her tomb.

The little girl is screaming
the man has done his deed
he suddenly feels satisfied
like a vampire after feed

Scared of the attention
the girl banging on the door
he panicks and strangles her
as she drops to the floor.

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  • 15 years ago

    by killcupidxoxo

    That was really good. you took a totally different view on a a sexual predator and showed that even tough they are criminals, they are human too, and hurt and pain has driven them to this. its really powerful and interesting, keep up the good work - btw I AM IN NO WAY CONDONING THIS BEHAVIOUR!!!!!!!!!! I think people who do this are sick and disgusting, and just wanted to comment on the different angle this poem has taken.

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Wow, this was sad. and not what i was expecting.. people like that are so wrong.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Morgan

    Excellent and dark

  • 16 years ago

    by Morgan

    Excellent and dark

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I love your poems so much, that is really good.