Yea i love it....and i write like this to....soo check my poems out and plz comment :]] ty...and nice job..keep it up!!

Like it :) very good:)

I love that.. a very big reminder of something that happened in my life.

Hey Yea i like it its grea, especially for you first poem on the site, Well done. Good job with the rhyming and flow, although it did get a bit cracked,
Anways, still a 5/5
Thanks for adding me to your fave's.
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~She Died Screaming

That is one of the best poem i've ever read. you have some great talent. i hope to read more of your poems.

moon light night

I think u've really opened up what people like this go through.

Excellent job...sad poem but very true and deep!!

Luv this poem its really good very easy to relate to. u have great talent. cant wait to see what else u will write

Absolutely amazing! you're one of my favorite poets, and this is only the third poem of yours that I've read. (*hint hint* add more ;) ).

this reminds me almost of a song, and the stanza about big problems and major issues could be the chorus. if you put just a little more time into this, this could very well be a song.

regardless, an absolutely amazing poem, and one that I loved.

Don't stop writing, I love your stuff

Of course i like it... duh. lol
well, i really like ur writing, and think you should write more. it may be the topic you are writing about, but im really into it. keep writing. and let me know if you need to talk. 5/5

Yeah i agree with the above ur an amazing writer. the poem is deep and has alot of stuff i can relate to. keep writing

Cool poem I like. keep writing. Thanks for comment on
"Bleeding on the inside".

Blown away by this one....VERY DEEP! I LOVE IT!