I don't think I really got this one...not a personal fav but funny poems aren't always easy...which is why most of us don't write many. lol Jpoet*

No, no, no
its an excellent poem.

it reminds me of when i was a kid listening to nursery rhymes!

Congrats on the originality and your perfect story.
!!!
5/5
~Emma

I thought it was brilliant
It was so random and it made me laugh out loud!
Fab poem!
5/5
*Gem*

I think u shuld u continue dis story cos it plays on ur playful side dat u really dnt explore enuff durin dis story and is def. in nursery rhyme style. I luv it iits jus fun and interestin and v.childish lol. it appeals 2 a whole new side 2 ur character dat poems and quotes aint seen yet!!!
Love you,
XxXxX

Hey
This isnt crap. Anything that gives people a giggle is good and i thought this poem was superb! 5/5

Kelly
xx

[hehe]
this makes me giggle.
:] you did a great job on keeping up the rhyming.funny poems are hard to write, but you did a good job
5/5

LOL.
this made me laugh a bit lol.
I love the rythming its great and you used your imagination i loved how you made the kitty sail across a bath LOL.
xoxroxyxox

Awe this is a really cute poem! I love your writting style and the cute little tale you told, except the last line didn't make much sence... why was a bath breaking laws???