I love how it flows so smoothly. i also love how you put much emotion into it.

Even tho its a long poem it kept me intrigued the whole time... i loved it...

This poem is absolutely AMAZING!!!

Omg thats so perfect!!!! no what happened in the porm but the way it was writen! i see why so many votes. well good job to say the least!

Wow. That brought me to tears. Poems rarely do that... Thank you so much for writing something so beautiful and sharing it with everyone! Definitely worth 5 out of 5!

Astonishing.

Wow I really loved it! Hope to read some more

Wow, this brought tears to my eyes. how did u come up with the making of this poem? excellent job 5/5

Very sad. It's a bit long for my taste but that's usually the case when the poem resembles a story. Good use of words

I really liked this one. one of my favorite of urs. lol.

xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..

OMG!!! that was sooo sad! *tear* i am lost had tears in my eyes, but it was really good. 5/5

xo kisses xo

BEAUTIFUL!!!....Continue to write..I love your work.

That Is So Sad It Made Me Cry... Very Good 5/5 Keep Up The Good Work.

Love it... amazing writing! Most definitely a favorite !!! Keep up the great work!