Oh..my ..goodness!!! BRAVOOO!
For one, this title is just so damn catchy my first thought was "oh that sounds interesting"..Excellent!

Secondly, great opening stanza that was just amazing...especially that last line since thats a well known quote!!

This poem was actually terribly sad, but your rhymes were interesting as well as the whole story line!!! Loved this write..absolutley loved it!
Chelsey

This poem really touched me. It's an awesome write.
Keep up the good work.

Hey sweetheart.
Im not entirely sure what to say about that, apart from good LORD it was incredible. it drew me in n i couldnt take my eyes off the screen!!!
i love you SO much

I really like this poem I actually got some ideas to write about from it so I hope it dont mind but I have nothing posted yet but if you would check it out.....

I really like this poem I actually got some ideas to write about from it so I hope it dont mind but I have nothing posted yet but if you would check it out.....

This gave me shivers... you're so amazing, Si.

Thats so flippin great. Nothing 'good' about it!!! Its great!

Wow ... its been a long time since i read any of your stuff.. and you may or may not remember me... but no matter... this poem is really moving.. i think its inspired me to write something! thanks!!
take care
amanda