Wow!! Very powerful poem. Excellent rhyming and flow. I loved how you asked questions in the poem. That really made me feel involved. Great Job.

&& thanks for the comment

This is excellent, a plea to God to get you back to who you were. I think more people should make a plea like this. Wonderful job!

No, dear, no. I hate to see you sad. Stiffen up that upper lip, come on. You might have changed, but that heart of yours can never. Temptations, trouble, friends leaving, betrayals, regrets.....teenage life is anything but easy. But with a little courage, a smiling face and trust in your own goodness (that is really, really, trust me, EVIDENT) you can make it through dear....I might have changed a little....but that will not change the person within you ever. As diana so rightly said, the wrong in you needs only two things to be corrected....a prayer and a desire to be purer....and you truly have both....here are someone's wise words that may help .....

"The way to happiness: keep your heart free from hate, your mind from worry. Live simply, expect little, give much. Fill your life with love. Scatter sunshine. Forget self, think of others. Do as you would be done by. Try this for a week and you will be surprised."

Ever you need me I'm always there....'m sure you know that :)
Take care chelly, Lots of love, Dhaval

Great job..keep writing
alot of emotion..

Chels dear, sorry if you feel this way, remember What man say's, just can't be done, God can do it through his only son, So put the impossible upon God's plate, The answer will come, And it will be great!

great poem, though sad but so breataking pennd, chels dear i hope everything well with you, please do take care, bert ~

Dont feel bad you are probably just getting older but i know what it is likw to wake up one day and think how much you have changed and hate it!

Wow..this poem is very very good. I loved it.
I know how you feel tho...so your not alone :(
5/5

Amazing!

Chels I love who you are inside and out.....

Now go open your e-mail and click that pretty little button girl...
We are on our way.....
Whooohoooo

Wow... no I mean WOW. lol look at all those comments and stuf people hav said 2 u beautiful :) I'm not going 2 add but just say look at it! that is a testiment not about God but about u *grins* people would not say those things about the person u described in your poem :)

anywaze... COMMENTING ON THE POEM!

as always ur poems are easy to read. U capture our imagination and 4 those of us who can relate u spell out wat is buzzing around in our busy little heads. :)

U in your imperfections are perfect and exactly how God made you to be.

He never looks down and is dissapointed but instead looks 4ward and says... wow look at the women this girl will become.

so chin up :) knowing greater is he who is in u than he who is in the world :)

Jeremiah 29 v 11-14 :)

*hugs & kisses*

Lol i meant 2 say read this in from of the Jeremiah thingy...

um... about ur club i would LOVE 2... but I'm in a club and don't know how 2 change clubs! if u tell me how 2 change I will cause I never go there cause they r all anti jesus lol

still love u! *grins*

xoxo

Chelsey Chelsey Chelsey...I could really relate to this poem, as a sister you know why - I have poured my heart and soul out to you on many an occassion...I want to remind you that none of us is flawless, you included my sister and that although you cannot hear him God is always watching and applauding the good deeds you do...you should know that babes you have the strongest faith and one of the kindest hearts I have been blessed to meet. Never ever let that go, though at times you may be fed up and ready to give up...you can't...like God ... I love you, I need you :o)