Excellent but sad.....definately a well written poem!! Full of emotion...makes u want to kno more tho...what happened to the grl? did she die or leave or did her mom kill her? maybe u should think bout writtin a lil more next time?? idk but it was very well done

Tis a good poem. well written. kinda sad!

I think this is great keep up the great work

Ur poems seem to have a link.
im guessing you either have problems much like this or you just enjoy this genre of poem.

well keep it up and keep originality clear. it got a bit lost in this one.

~Emma
4/5

This is a good poem...its a worry though...hope things are ok. 5/5 keep writing

Another great poem by you. I don't have many pointers, other than you should try to balance your lines out more. it's more aesthetically pleasing, and it sounds better...but, that only comes with time and experience.

I like this almost as much as the perfect girl poem. it's so filled with emotion, and feeling.

Keep it up

I loved the retorical questions at the beginning, they really spiced it up!
5/5 again, keep writing, dont give up... and you can go far.

God i know exactly how you feel. you should read my poem "Remember Mom?" it's just like this one, only more detailed and extended. But you have talent, keep writing!

Again this is awesome like perfect girl. bit scray though hope stuff @ homes ok.
not much more to say except keep writing

Aww i llike it.
is it true or just like a poem brain blast? lol

Haha i get them all the time

but i feel it lol

This is way sad, but still an excellent poem u got mad skills girl. Keep it up.

+.+ I hope ur relationship with ur mother get's better :'( +.+

Wow Another WOW and 3 more after that...you are very talented....I wish I could write like you ;-(...i'm jealous

I like this.
It was very sad, but beautifully written.
I think you did a wonderful job.

Aww this is sad, how old is the girl that's speaking?

This is painful. :( Excellent. xx keep it up