I believe you have done another great job here in this poem, such a great emotions, and I like the style it self...
keep up the great job like always, and I believe it deserve a 5/5......so 5/5 from me.

Ahhhhhh Jess; I should have not committed to commnet upon your poem until I saw it. I am really bad with short poems and hence I have not voted.

The poem has nice integrity and is a thought evoking one. The last line is a Show Stealer. Low ratings on this one?? Umphh.. Maybe because, idiots like me, do not like short poems. Maybe because they cannot see the effort you have put into the structure of the poem. Or maybe beacuse they did not believe in the quote or thought that it was originally not yours but their own.

But, I would have liked one change in wordings. In the line "Emotions cruelly released"... I want to see a different word for released.

You do not have to need much in terms of flow in such a short poem and I felt the flow is quite good and I do nto hope to express a vision in such a short oen either. Expressing the concept itself takes it's toll.

Well; That's all I can really say. Do nto worry about the votes Jess. That's a cute little guy you have bore and you know it.

I thought you did an excellent job with this style of poem. It really came to me as emotional. Don't ask why lol. I am not quite familiar with the whole style, so I may not be having a total 'honest' vote here. I thought it was just really well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Dribble.. haha thats a funny word..
Good poem :)

These poems are hard!!! I like the ending the best... coulda sworn it was 9 syllables though :) Smiles i think is 2 cover 2 pain 1 but 1 tears 1 free 1 it 1 ... maybe smiles is one.... i dunno Great Job thought :)
5/5

That is a very unique way to write a poem! i loved it. it seems like it would be hard to write a poem like this and still have it sound good but u did a marvelous job! 5/5

A lovely poem, my friend, that is meaningful. Well done. I love how in a short poem you can express so much, it was awesomely done.
xxxxxx

Way better then my clarity pyramid. :) good work it was well written and a great read.

Wow, this is my favourite, short, simple, straight to the point, and it shows the amount of talent you have because these type of poems are hard to write. another 5/5

Very thought provoking. Well written.
A lot of power in just a few short words.

Great job
Jeannie

Very painfully and sadly written but I loved it all the same. I like the form of writing you used and you had a great choice of words in this one too! 5/5 Keep up the good work! Thx for the comment too, it meant a lot to me!

Innoc3ntStar

Great work, another unique poem... ur very talented.

Jess this is how i feel everyday, i cry because of the situation im in and i hold in so much pain!