This is a beautiful, emotional poem, with a great rhyme scheme thou it doesnt seem to follow through alll the way. nayway hope you gd, great poem. please return the favour thanx and good luck

I went thourgh one of the worst break ups ever..and this poem is exactly how i feel great job

Hey
taht was really good
ryhme was good
even though it didnt always go
keep it up :D

xo

Great poem, i love it, the way u worded it n how it ryhmed was great, good work, keep it up
xx