Darkness

by Broken Hearted   Oct 11, 2006


The darkness envelops me
it takes me some were
no one will ever think of
finding me

the darkness tries to
find out my darkest
most innermost secrets
but i don't give it up

it tempts me with
the things i love
the most in life still
i hold on with all that
i have

but finally it tempts me with
what i love the most

-my love for my girl-

She threatens to take her life

I beg her to take me but
she wants to make me
suffer for all eternity so
she makes me watch her
take the life of my love

But i break free of the
hold she had on me to
launch myself forward and
take the knife in my heart
before she could take the life
of my love

made when i was with my friend danica

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  • 17 years ago

    by DBM

    Nice job! It might be a bit better if you spellchecked and punctuated, but overall, well done!

    *DeAtHbYmOnKeYs*

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