Loved the repitition at the begining of each stanza.
It was a really good poem
5/5
*Gem*

Nice work
sorry about you freind kinda strange he barely younger than me anyhow keep writting

What you mean mine are depressing.. wthm! =P

its good, the repetition is ok, but too much repetition for my liking ;)

5/5 good job

4/5 could have been better but it was still really good

XOJennaOX

As I promised, I react on/read your work.

I really liked this one; it's cold, tough and sad, but so true;
Hated by the World
and no one Cares about another
About Feelings and Thoughts

Lovely part. Keep on writing. And I wish you much strength to live with the loss.

Wow. this is so sad and touching. very good work 5/5

Whoever spike is i hope hes ok cause he is my bro
and i luv my bro

Awsome work.I wish I could pen true emotion like that instead of hiding behind big words and fancy phrases.
Thank you.

It was good but not asgood as dreaming i feel here your anger got in the ay of you ability. However giving that it ironically shows your anger whichis good lol. so yep erm.. welldone

xxx alex xxx