I like this one too. it's awesomee. why don't you have any comments? comments are fun. anyways.. i've read this one before. probably it's one you showed me on the bus or something.

Great poem, loved it keep up the work....

Wow.
This one I can relate too. I think that everyone at one point in their life is faced with jealousy. I know I have. I just think it's something that everyone has to go through at one point.
Great flow and vocabulary.
Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

This is pretty good dacey, keep it up, 5/5!!!

I thad a nice flow to it and I know of some people that could relate. *5/5*

Alyson

I loved this, I thought it was really well written.
The emotion you put in this shone through the words was what captured me so much.