Really depressing, deep and emotional, shows true care for a friend. well done
xxxx

This was so powerful, really moving. keep it up!

Awww wow this is a very good poem; its sad, but the way you wrote it talking to your friend was really good. 5/5

~Kristina

Wow! Its such a powerful poem. Very deep. I really like it! It is really moving. Keep it up!

Good poem. for what it is.

This is an interesting commentary on life, social reasoning and selfishness.

The rhyme is consistent and the flow even (whilst punctuation would help, the lack of it isn't doing that much damage due to meter).

Of the three you requested to be read, this is your strongest.

Bret

Interesting at the least.
I thought the idea was sweet and cute in a emotional way. More describing words might brighten it up a bit and make the flow easier to read but twas a good poem all in all =)

Very nice choice of words to use. And you just get to your point. Very well written. 5/5

Taylor

Wow...i really liked this, it was so sad and moving and the flow was perfect and the last line really stood out. Well done.

AWWWW I love this poem! You are a great writer! 5/5

Wow i like it keep it up!

Oh geez... That's so pretty and sweet!! Very nice indeed. 5/5

I like it...i really do...when reading it i have picture it in my mine!!!! keep it up

This poem was very well written and it had a lot of emotion, im confused about the end tho, did she tell her friend to kill herself too so they will still be together? anyway it was a very good poem 5/5

Really interesting idea,this was really different especially

You leave me with nothing to do
I'm not going to live without you
We can leave this world together
Lie in eternal peace forever

that stanza i liked your flow and liked your stories
Keep writing honey
Take care of yourself
See ya
Laura

Beautifully depressing lol. Some parts seemed to lack the flow the rest of poem held. I think if you spiced up your vocab a little, this could be a really great poem. Good read. 5/5

marcella

I love it!

VERY GOOD, WELL WRITTEN