Awww it may be old but it's very good, and very well written. Well Done.
Check out some of mine and tell me what you think. 5/5

God Bless,
Taylor

Aww. This one's cute too. It kind of reminds me of...me. Lol. I feel like that sometimes, but not all the time. If I try, I can relly focus on something else, but it comes and goes.

The flow was great! And the idea was cute. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Awwwwwww.......i liked it a 5/5 for me..

I want this poem!! its mine you stold it from me!! lol just kidding. my kinda poem thought its all me.. damn your good!!! 5/5