by Greta Oct 15, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
An angel with broken wings...he does not want to fly anymore...he gave up with his last tear...love broke his life...and everything that looked perfect , now is terrible.he takes the gun and puts it to his head..he slowly pushes the trigger and boom.....!now he is gone.no more pain in his eyes,no more love in his heart.everything will be alright because he does not feel his life anymore... |
by Ashley Ann
Honestly I didnt like it because one: angels arent living so they cant kill themselves two: your poem isnt in a correct format of stanza's and three: your poem doesnt even rhyme, and if it does I can not tell. Work on it a little. 2/5 |