It's very good!

My msn messenger is dreamingsweetly09@hotmail.com, please add me and we'll talk about our poems, there's something i'd like to ask you!

Im pretty sure i would cry... good poem, keep up the great work

Wow....i can relate to this in a way...very good poem though..a 5/5 keep on writing

I'm sure you would be missed if you died. i can relate to what you are saying. i ask myself that question everynight. but i never find an answer. but great poem shanik