This is a great poem I like the way it just flows along as you read it, no awkwardness in lines just easy transitions, great job

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Very good yet again! In your poems, you choose your words so greatly and you always have a great flow going. Excellent writer! Keep up the good work! 5/5

Innoc3ntStar

Thats a very nice poem...it makes you wonder, it took me a while to intake it. Amazing job:):)5/5

This is anothet great job. it flowed well and i think it nicely written5/5

god bless

This is anothet great job. it flowed well and i think it nicely written5/5

god bless

Very well done! 5/5

God Bless,
Taylor

Great poem ! Short but to the point. I too feel like I wake up and go through the same rituals everyday. You have written an excellent poem. 5/5

Letty

I like it.. I don't really get it. But it's a good poem. I guess you don't really have to understand it, it's still a poem. Great write

This is another great poem by you, 5/5