Comments : The real world, baby =/

  • 17 years ago

    by JLT

    Awwww. Ren, darling. That was amazing. Simple, but like super deep in there. =|. It's awesome.
    Heart, Jessica.

  • 17 years ago

    by RaNdOmRoB

    Ren that poem was full of meaning u will become a great poet that was soo deep

  • 17 years ago

    by Nathan Hickling

    Very well done, a clear meaning, and not too heavy to read either. very well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    Good poem.
    peace out
    anna soffe

  • 17 years ago

    by argueing with the rain

    Love it. u captured the feeling that society lays on us.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Pretty cool. Never read anything like that before. I liked it! :)