Heyy, I really like it, and i no what its about so its all that more touching but don't let people get to you i know you personaly and you a wonderful person, you strong wise and fun so just forget about everyone and try to have fun i know thats hard to do but you'll relize life is better when you try to forget about the people that hurt you and put them in the past, if you can't do that then just try to have as little to do with them as possible , i'll talk to you later lol. xoxo love Crystal!
Hmm, I sort of see why you would put this one here instead of the sad poem section. The rhymes were pretty good, not brilliant or anything, but were average. It was an overall good poem. So well done and keep up the good work.
OMG. this is liek the story of my life. i actually like it so much. and i know why you put it in here because its actually about life.. its not depressing thats just what her life is about. i love it 5/5
If i were to lie i would say it was perfect but no poems perfect however this was a fantastic effort perhap you could have put more metaphors in it to help give us a easy vision but that may be your style and i like individuality i really do like your poems sammy xxx alex xxx
Good write. I don't know if you noticed, but this poem took a different approach on that subject matter than most poems do. I liked that. The flow could definately use some work.. I'm not exactly sure how though--- I think the imagery was fantastic. Great job! Keep writing!