This poem reads to much like a story. its theme is good but the sentences are 2 long. i i personally try to keep my senteces as short and descriptive as possible. you should also use adjectives a bit more.

eg no longer do i cry
when you hold me tight
into the night
as we share our love
my heart sores high
on the wings of a dove
then i could scale
the tallest mountains
while your love lightens my load

I think everyones writting is diffrent
and no matter how its written
you had alot of meaning to this poem
and i rather enjoyed it

Awesome.

U have a great way with words just work on ur technique a little.

I must say I rather enjoyed this one, well written, great flow, absoulty heartfelt emtion,
and excelletn word choice 5/5