Your syllable count is perfect .
I find the overuse of the word "and" at the beginning of 3 lines to be a little much though.

Maybe the 8th and 9th line could go a something like this :

setting my soul free to wander
awaken within beautiful dreams
or
awaken in it, beautiful dreams

Just a little helpful thought !

Wonderful read, thank-you for sharing
Take care, Luanne

NICOLE PERFECT. PERFECT!! U DIDNT MESS ANYTHING UP!! LOVED IT!! lol

This is pretty good! I like my dreams and some days I wish I could control them. :/

What a believer poem! 5/5

Awww....

this poem is freakign amaizing...!!!!!

i just fell in love..

i love how if flows when you read it aloud & how the wording is just perfect