Comments : Lost

  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    I know what u mean :( Anyway great poem and i loved it. 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 17 years ago

    by just a little girl

    I often feel like like that but dont worry as the ideas will soon come rushing back as you are a talented writer, i will look foreward to reading all of your other poems x

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    Another poem that I can relate too. I enter contest on this site and it seems like right after I enter them I get writer's block. I understand where your coming from it took me three days to write one poem. 5/5

    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by steve

    Ill agree its not your best but its still good dont be too hard, i got a few poems that i just couldnt express myself in and i too tried to write about it its called why write lol, try this

    It frustrates me,
    not being able to write
    My thoughts are dull
    when once they were so bright

    try moving the "so" before "bright" to after "it frustrates me" it will help the flow in that stanza