Never leave the one you love for the one you like

by cassanova   Oct 16, 2006


One day he new,
cause she was acting different,
he new it was something,
just didn't know what specific,

day in and day out,
he would ask her whats wrong,
she would say something sweet,
to convince him there bond was strong,

this went on for a couple weeks,
she started coming home late from work,
he got insecure and started asking questions,
she got defensive and made him feel like a jerk,

then came the day,
she came home late,
said she doesn't want a relationship,
and she doesn't want him to wait,

but the boys love for her was incomparable,
and by no one could be replaced,
all he wanted was her,
but she was gone without a trace,

then time goes on and she wants him back,
the boy doesn't know whether to be sad or psyched,
he fights his feelings for her and calmly responds,
you shouldn't have left the one you loved for the one you liked..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Erikah

    Wow...this is a really gud poem...i am going through something like this and im really glad i read this...im DEFINETELY gunna change my thinking. thanx!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenie

    Wow paul...im so glad to see u r writting again, and im also so glad to see ur talent has improved :)..
    im just so sry ur having problems w/ nicole again,
    r u ok?!?!!?!? write me somtime...

    amazing poem baby doll
    !

    jenie

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Oh this poem was really good! i liked it very very much.. you really did love her huh?

  • 17 years ago

    by .:*Br!tt@ny*:.

    I love this its really good....