Awe, that was a truly emotional poem. It had a lot of meaning within your words and I love reading the fragmented sentences poems. Also, another good thing in this poem was your repetition of certain phrases, made the effect stronger! Keep it up. 5/5

-Jenna.

Good job. You had raw emotions and intensity. But I think you can also make the poem clearer about what or who you're talking about. KEep it up

This is very heartfelt..its true emotion. and this is like a song some lines are reapeting but i like it very nicely written. wonderful job5/5

I lvoe the emotion, but the rhyming didnt flow so great... otherwise, great job

Awww! Very emotianal, i really like it! Very deep! I like the way its written. Its great! Keep it up! :) xx

Your meaning really shows here, but there could be better word choice. Still, though, the emotion and feeling of this poem is clear, and heartfelt. Nice job!

Very awesome dude! Love can hurt in the end.....but anyways it was great poem keep it up!

Awws . This is emotional . Well written .
The repitition (did i spell that right ? xD) . I like it . Makes those lines a lot stronger .
GOod job .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Good poem... good emotion... 5/5

Oh wow this is wonderful. so much emotion in it. i love it. the rhyming was all that good, but you tried. great job! 5/5

~Kristina

Another great one, the emotion was just seeping through this, it was well done! and the dynamics of the poem were great, with all the caps and the things in (--) s... i loved the intensity of this. FLAWless! to me anyways :)

Emmily

So perfect and so sad,good job,5/5

Wow amazing job on writing such a sad poem, but i can relate to some of it! great job! 5/5

~Kristina